Advertising  Rainbow Dew was really fun. Although, I could have added something more to make it even more exciting and welcoming. I liked my piece because it was original, it was creative and convincing  . After video taping our commercial i felt that I was good at having a good tone of voice to keep the audience engaged and discussing  what the product was. I thought I could have improved on viedo editing the last part and taping the sean at differnt places so it would seem boring. A persuasive essay writting techniques and strategies I'd like to try next time is  use more  statistics so the adiance would me more persuaded.I  enjoyed videotaping the commercial the best because i was fun and we had a aswome time. My goals for next time i write are use persading words so the watcher/reader would me more intersted in the writting/ commercial. I learned that i was good at using experssions,i could turn a negitive thing into positive thing and i am good at motivating others. My writting mentors are mostly Rick Riordan, Cynthia Lord and Lois Lowry. Readers will see Creativity in Cynithia Lords writing Adventure in Rick Riprdan and Excitment in Lois Lowrys writting. I really enjoyes this activity. It is better then writhing essays. We got to persuade people in differnt and fun ways.