The studying and studying in english clss for the NJ ask really paid off! The nj ask was really easy. It was 10 times eaiser then last year. The reading and writting parts I understood and was able to write alot. The english part was easy except of one essay. The essay about the labraian was the hardest. There was nothing to write about and it wasnt a good topic for a persusasive. The reading part was easy too. All the reading tasks were stright forword and easily understood. The worst reading topic would be the last one we did. (forgot the name) It was easy but it was a little confusing. Thanks to all the early perpersations in Mrs. Patalanos class, i fell pretty confident in getting a good score. =)
Thursday, May 19, 2011
Thursday, April 28, 2011
The BIG suprise!
“ Mom and Dads anniversary is coming up. We have to do something!” exclaimed Allie. Allie and Alex are planning something big for their parents.
“ Well Allie, what do you want to do?”
“ We could make a surprise desert, but I’ll have to be simple. We only have two hours until mom and dad get home.”
“ Okay listen carefully Alex. We don’t want anything to go wrong.” Alex usually mixes everything up. He is always confused.
“ Alex, You go get a pack of cake mix, two eggs, carnation milk and pots and pans. Ill go get the rest of the supplies and pre heat the oven .”
As Alex rushed to get the supplies, I pre heated the oven and got the supplies, until I hear a loud crash!
“ Alex, are you okay!”
“ Yes but we have one problem! As I was reaching for the eggs it tipped over and the who egg carton dropped and all the eggs was splattering everywhere.”
My temper was getting high but something stopped me from bursting.
“ O great, now what are we going to do.” I said trying not to scream at him. The last thing we would want is Alex with a big tantrum.
“ Well “Alex suggested “ We could call aunt Ann. She live only two blocks away”
“ Alex, you saved us! Who would have ever thought of that plan. You go call her and Ill clean up.”
Ten minutes later aunt Ann arrive out of breath.
“ Alex called and told me it was and emergency. I came quickly as I could and I bought some eggs. For a second I thought some thing terrible might have happened.”
“ Thank you so much for coming. Alex accidentally spilled the whole egg carton. It is mom and dads anniversary and we wanted to make I special.”
“ Don’t worry.” said aunt Ann “ Ill help you and we will finfish in no time.”
Alex and Allie started mixing and aunt Ann poured the batter into the pan. Ten minutes later the cake was in the oven and we started cleaning up. After about 45 minutes the cake was done. Aunt Ann slowly but careful took the cake out. When it cooled down, we all designed it and made it look pretty. It was like I could taste the cake in my mouth. Then we hid it in the basement.
“ Again. Thank you so much!” cried Allie and Alex.
About ten minutes later, the door bell rang. It was mom and dad.
“ Alex remember not to mentions anytime at dinner time. Its I surprise.”
Their parents came back from work. They all ate together at dinner and enjoyed. Right after dinner, I went downstairs to get ready and Alex bribed mom and dad to come downstairs. As they got downstairs , Allie and Alex screamed“ SURPRISE”.
“ Thank you so much!” exclaimed mom
“ How did you guys do this. Its wonderful!”
We all ate cake happily and mom and dad really loved our idea!
Thursday, April 14, 2011
Quote essay
Too often people take the easy way out of things. J.K. Rowling optimizes this in is famous quote "We must all face the choice between what is right and what is easy." The easy way out of things will not solve anything. You have to do what is right and know it will effect you weather its in a positive way or negative. People need to learn how to think abot the big picture before they make a move. It will effect then either way.
Once my friend were having a big dispute. At that time we all were little and didn't know anything about life. One friend was arguing about how the other one is mean and the other was arguing about how she isn't mean and that she always looks at the bad side of others.It lasted a long time and then they decided to ask me what side i was so because they wanted to get it over with and see who was right. I choose the right thing to do instead of take the easy way out and solving the problem by a simple sorry. I decided not to answer and let them solve their disputes byt them self. I am so glad i did that because i was the right thing to do and the easy was out.
There are many people in this world who was to do the opposite to this. One example is Hitler. He disliked Jews so he decided to gang up and kill them. Instead of protesting and solving the problem by peace and war he decided to take the easy way out and do was he believed in. His goal was to make everybody that isnt Jewish on his side and kill. Instead it just cause everybody to do the opposite. They stated to hate Hitler. Since he took the easy way out he made people hate him.
The choice is ours and we much choose what is right." I don't know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody.(Bill Cosby) Just how Bill Cosby said this, many people decide to take the easy was out of things to pleas others.
Once my friend were having a big dispute. At that time we all were little and didn't know anything about life. One friend was arguing about how the other one is mean and the other was arguing about how she isn't mean and that she always looks at the bad side of others.It lasted a long time and then they decided to ask me what side i was so because they wanted to get it over with and see who was right. I choose the right thing to do instead of take the easy way out and solving the problem by a simple sorry. I decided not to answer and let them solve their disputes byt them self. I am so glad i did that because i was the right thing to do and the easy was out.
There are many people in this world who was to do the opposite to this. One example is Hitler. He disliked Jews so he decided to gang up and kill them. Instead of protesting and solving the problem by peace and war he decided to take the easy way out and do was he believed in. His goal was to make everybody that isnt Jewish on his side and kill. Instead it just cause everybody to do the opposite. They stated to hate Hitler. Since he took the easy way out he made people hate him.
The choice is ours and we much choose what is right." I don't know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody.(Bill Cosby) Just how Bill Cosby said this, many people decide to take the easy was out of things to pleas others.
Thursday, April 7, 2011
Feild Trips
Persuasive writing topic:
In order to save money, your superintendent on the Edison Schools is thinking about canceling all field trips for all school because of the budget cut. Write a letter to your superintendent persuading him or her to allow students to continue attending field trips. Give at least three reasons to support your position.
Dear Superintendent Dr. Richard O’Malley,
“ We must all face the choice between what is right and what is easy”. ( J.K. Rowling). You choice regarding no field trips is not right. In behalf of our students, it is a request that you do not put a stop to the field trips. We all agree that with the plenty of budget cut you should cut some activates in or after school but please do not cut field trips. It would be a imprudent thing to do. Field trips are educational in some way. . We get to meet our other friends and best of all we need a break from staying in school for five days in a row.
Education comes first. Without being educated we wouldn’t be able to do half the things we can do today. Schools provide this for us. Well, sometimes we need a break and we go on field trips since we been trying our best the whole year. Cutting field trips is not a good idea. In some sort of way it is educational. We all learn something from it. We get to learn about the world around us and enjoy. Recent studies show that fieldtrips provide the same amount of education as a full school day. The opposition to this statement would say that you could learn about the world around you if you and you family went to the same place. Well, it wouldn’t be the same with family. You wouldn’t get to be with you friends and enjoy.
Being with friend is what everyone enjoys. During field trips we learn and enjoy. With friend we could understand the things we didn’t understand. We could meet new people and make new friends. The opposition to this would say that you meet your friend everyday. Well, meeting your friend in school is much different then being with them the whole day.
Learning could get a little boring once in a while. Even if some field trips are educational and we get to learn in a different surrounding it does get a little tiring. Just how adults get tired of working all day, students get tired of being in school. The opposition to this statement would say that kids are in school less then parents/adults. Well recent studies proves this wrong. Eighty-five present of the time kids are more tired then adults. It might look like they are more active and they have more energy but it is wrong.
Your choice on no field trips is wrong. Field trips are educational in some way, we get to meet our friend and we get to have a break from school. Please listen to the student and make a wise decision. Just remember what you do will effect the student in a positive you negative way.
Sincerely,
Bijal Patel
In order to save money, your superintendent on the Edison Schools is thinking about canceling all field trips for all school because of the budget cut. Write a letter to your superintendent persuading him or her to allow students to continue attending field trips. Give at least three reasons to support your position.
Dear Superintendent Dr. Richard O’Malley,
“ We must all face the choice between what is right and what is easy”. ( J.K. Rowling). You choice regarding no field trips is not right. In behalf of our students, it is a request that you do not put a stop to the field trips. We all agree that with the plenty of budget cut you should cut some activates in or after school but please do not cut field trips. It would be a imprudent thing to do. Field trips are educational in some way. . We get to meet our other friends and best of all we need a break from staying in school for five days in a row.
Education comes first. Without being educated we wouldn’t be able to do half the things we can do today. Schools provide this for us. Well, sometimes we need a break and we go on field trips since we been trying our best the whole year. Cutting field trips is not a good idea. In some sort of way it is educational. We all learn something from it. We get to learn about the world around us and enjoy. Recent studies show that fieldtrips provide the same amount of education as a full school day. The opposition to this statement would say that you could learn about the world around you if you and you family went to the same place. Well, it wouldn’t be the same with family. You wouldn’t get to be with you friends and enjoy.
Being with friend is what everyone enjoys. During field trips we learn and enjoy. With friend we could understand the things we didn’t understand. We could meet new people and make new friends. The opposition to this would say that you meet your friend everyday. Well, meeting your friend in school is much different then being with them the whole day.
Learning could get a little boring once in a while. Even if some field trips are educational and we get to learn in a different surrounding it does get a little tiring. Just how adults get tired of working all day, students get tired of being in school. The opposition to this statement would say that kids are in school less then parents/adults. Well recent studies proves this wrong. Eighty-five present of the time kids are more tired then adults. It might look like they are more active and they have more energy but it is wrong.
Your choice on no field trips is wrong. Field trips are educational in some way, we get to meet our friend and we get to have a break from school. Please listen to the student and make a wise decision. Just remember what you do will effect the student in a positive you negative way.
Sincerely,
Bijal Patel
Thursday, March 31, 2011
School Uniforms
Dear Superintendent Dr. Richard O’Malley,
“ The unity of freedom has never relied on the uniformity of opinion.” (John F. Kennedy). The explanation of this statement is said to be what the Board of Education is opposing on. The upcoming school year will be starting off with a tremendous new look. Their opinion regarding mandatory school uniforms should not be approved due to the extra cost, less chance of improving student/school safety and academic progress and no personal freedom.
Uniforms aren’t a good way to improve students discipline , motivation and school safety. No matter what anyone tries, a student with a bad nature will stay the same. Uniforms will not improve their discipline.
Nobody can recognize a student form the outside. The real him or her is recognized by the inside. The opposition to this fact would agree. They would think that “punishing” a kid by making him or her wear what they don’t want to would teach him or her the lesson. Well, maybe that would work, but it would be the punishment that goes in one ear and out the other. They probably would forget the real reason why they are wearing uniforms. Nothing would be done.
Kid sooner or later grow. Many students will defiantly grow out of their uniforms. Parents would have to buy their kids new uniforms every time the old one doesn’t fit. Uniforms cost close 75 to 100 dollars. Every time you grow out of the uniforms, the parents would just be wasting money. Think about the poor families. They barely cant provide equipments for themselves, how will they be able to provide uniforms of their kid(s). Some families will be crossing their poverty line. Well , maybe you could buy larger sizes of uniforms form the beginning but it wouldn’t look nice. It would be too baggy and not look proper. This is clearly evident that uniforms would cause big problems.
Clothing is a big part of teen search. They get to express their own identity in their own ways. Uniforms will take away that advantage. All the kids will look the same and teachers will have hard times trying to find out which student is which. Well, clothing cant be the only way to express themselves. There are also other accessories. Well wearing a uniform requires not accessories unless if it is the same for everyone. Uniforms will take away students self-expression.
It is in my interest that uniforms should not be required. If the proposal is passed some student and parents wont be very happy. All the students would look and act the same. Not only that they cost too much money. Uniforms will not solve any problems to improve the students. Making a attempt to read and change your mind , will not only help me but it will help you understand our opinion. Thinking of everyone would be the way to solve the uniform problem.
Thursday, March 24, 2011
Rainbow Dew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Boardroom)
There is a new soda flavor in town thanks to the Coca Cola Company. They have the right thing for you. RAINBOW DEW!! It is the fabulous Mountain Dew with four new flavors in one can.. The amazing flavors are Creamy Cotton Candy. Glowing Grape, Blushing Blueberry and Ridicules Razzberry. This isn’t any regular soda, its unique in its own ways. It became so popular that the company sold 50,100 packs in one day! Rainbow Dew isn’t like the other soft drinks, it is extremely healthy but at the same time delicious.
Rainbow Dew isn’t like the other sodas, Its unique in its own ways. While drinking the amazing soda you’ll smell all for the flavors. The consumer will enjoy their drink and smell the amazing fragrant. Unlike any other sodas, Rainbow Dew NEVER gets flat! Once you open the can it will taste the same until it expires. Don’t worry about the flavors getting mixed up, you will taste them at different times. It probably sounds crazy for a soda to have four flavors in one can but, due to the liquid density of the different flavors it wont get mixed up. Unlike any other soda, Rainbow Dew’s color wont stay on you teeth.
Rainbow Dew is the healthiest soft drink ever made. It only has 54 milligrams of caffeine in a 12 ounce can. That is half of Pepsi Coke! Unlike many other drinks , the caffeine in Rainbow Dew is not strong for kids. But the best part about it is that there is 20 times less sugar Rainbow Dew then in any soda ever manufactured! This soda is perfect for the adults who have diabetic since it has less sugar. Not only is it healthy of adults but it is prefect for little children who’s parents don’t let them drink soda since it has too much sugar.
Rainbow Dew became extremely popular in only three days that 68% of the schools and amusement parks have Rainbow Dew in there vending machines. Not only that, half of the public restaurants switched, Sunkist to Rainbow Dew! Rainbow Dew outsells many other brands! Most people even prefer it over other brands.
Rainbow Dew is the perfect soda for the costumers. It is the healthiest soda ever made. Since it is the healthiest soda ever made it became so popular so fast. Rainbow Dew is one of a kind so buy Rainbow Dew today!
Rainbow Dew isn’t like the other sodas, Its unique in its own ways. While drinking the amazing soda you’ll smell all for the flavors. The consumer will enjoy their drink and smell the amazing fragrant. Unlike any other sodas, Rainbow Dew NEVER gets flat! Once you open the can it will taste the same until it expires. Don’t worry about the flavors getting mixed up, you will taste them at different times. It probably sounds crazy for a soda to have four flavors in one can but, due to the liquid density of the different flavors it wont get mixed up. Unlike any other soda, Rainbow Dew’s color wont stay on you teeth.
Rainbow Dew is the healthiest soft drink ever made. It only has 54 milligrams of caffeine in a 12 ounce can. That is half of Pepsi Coke! Unlike many other drinks , the caffeine in Rainbow Dew is not strong for kids. But the best part about it is that there is 20 times less sugar Rainbow Dew then in any soda ever manufactured! This soda is perfect for the adults who have diabetic since it has less sugar. Not only is it healthy of adults but it is prefect for little children who’s parents don’t let them drink soda since it has too much sugar.
Rainbow Dew became extremely popular in only three days that 68% of the schools and amusement parks have Rainbow Dew in there vending machines. Not only that, half of the public restaurants switched, Sunkist to Rainbow Dew! Rainbow Dew outsells many other brands! Most people even prefer it over other brands.
Rainbow Dew is the perfect soda for the costumers. It is the healthiest soda ever made. Since it is the healthiest soda ever made it became so popular so fast. Rainbow Dew is one of a kind so buy Rainbow Dew today!
Thursday, March 17, 2011
Advertising Rainbow Dew was really fun. Although, I could have added something more to make it even more exciting and welcoming. I liked my piece because it was original, it was creative and convincing . After video taping our commercial i felt that I was good at having a good tone of voice to keep the audience engaged and discussing what the product was. I thought I could have improved on viedo editing the last part and taping the sean at differnt places so it would seem boring. A persuasive essay writting techniques and strategies I'd like to try next time is use more statistics so the adiance would me more persuaded.I enjoyed videotaping the commercial the best because i was fun and we had a aswome time. My goals for next time i write are use persading words so the watcher/reader would me more intersted in the writting/ commercial. I learned that i was good at using experssions,i could turn a negitive thing into positive thing and i am good at motivating others. My writting mentors are mostly Rick Riordan, Cynthia Lord and Lois Lowry. Readers will see Creativity in Cynithia Lords writing Adventure in Rick Riprdan and Excitment in Lois Lowrys writting. I really enjoyes this activity. It is better then writhing essays. We got to persuade people in differnt and fun ways.
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