Thursday, April 28, 2011

The BIG suprise!


“ Mom and Dads anniversary is coming up. We have to do something!” exclaimed Allie. Allie and Alex are planning something big for their parents.

“ Well Allie, what do you want to do?”

“ We could make a surprise desert, but I’ll have to be simple. We only have two hours until mom and dad get home.”

“ Okay listen carefully Alex. We don’t want anything to go wrong.” Alex usually mixes everything up. He is always confused.

“ Alex, You go get a pack of cake mix, two eggs, carnation milk and pots and pans. Ill go get the rest of the supplies and pre heat the oven .”

As Alex rushed to get the supplies, I pre heated the oven and got the supplies, until I hear a loud crash!

“ Alex, are you okay!”

“ Yes but we have one problem! As I was reaching for the eggs it tipped over and the who egg carton dropped and all the eggs was splattering everywhere.”

My temper was getting high but something stopped me from bursting.

“ O great, now what are we going to do.” I said trying not to scream at him. The last thing we would want is Alex with a big tantrum.



“ Well “Alex suggested “ We could call aunt Ann. She live only two blocks away”



“ Alex, you saved us! Who would have ever thought of that plan. You go call her and Ill clean up.”

Ten minutes later aunt Ann arrive out of breath.

“ Alex called and told me it was and emergency. I came quickly as I could and I bought some eggs. For a second I thought some thing terrible might have happened.”

“ Thank you so much for coming. Alex accidentally spilled the whole egg carton. It is mom and dads anniversary and we wanted to make I special.”


“ Don’t worry.” said aunt Ann “ Ill help you and we will finfish in no time.”

Alex and Allie started mixing and aunt Ann poured the batter into the pan. Ten minutes later the cake was in the oven and we started cleaning up. After about 45 minutes the cake was done. Aunt Ann slowly but careful took the cake out. When it cooled down, we all designed it and made it look pretty. It was like I could taste the cake in my mouth. Then we hid it in the basement.

“ Again. Thank you so much!” cried Allie and Alex.

About ten minutes later, the door bell rang. It was mom and dad.

“ Alex remember not to mentions anytime at dinner time. Its I surprise.”

Their parents came back from work. They all ate together at dinner and enjoyed. Right after dinner, I went downstairs to get ready and Alex bribed mom and dad to come downstairs. As they got downstairs , Allie and Alex screamed“ SURPRISE”.

“ Thank you so much!” exclaimed mom

“ How did you guys do this. Its wonderful!”


We all ate cake happily and mom and dad really loved our idea!

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